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Genre
Adventure
Characters
  • Doga
  • Nagraj
  • Parmanu
  • Super Commando Dhruva
Status
Complete

End of 21st Century....World is on verge of third world war...A war waged by Super hero children....
Only superheroes can save the world ....Heroes Against their Sons and daughters....

Nagraj Has twins from Visarpi....(Suggest Names)..one Son..One Daughter.
Dhruva has two sons (Both are good of course). Doga Will have a son (with bad temper)... Parmanu Again one son but bad..the gang leader......He makes a devastating attack on the BR office to eliminate all super heroes once and for all...Only Dhruva, Nagraj and Doga remains alive to fight another day...A new regime Starts where petty humans are to obey The rule of mighty Super Humans.....
Will the three old Boys be able to fight? Against there own Blood...Who will survive...Heroes...Santan?...Or the Humans......

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Average user rating from: 5 user(s)

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Overall rating 
 
2.2
Plot 
 
2.0  (5)
Characterization 
 
2.5  (5)
Exposition 
 
2.0  (5)
 
Santan Series 2013-06-22 11:00:14 Arun Kumar
Overall rating 
 
3.3
Plot 
 
3.5
Characterization 
 
3.0
Exposition 
 
3.5
Rocker of nation Reviewed by Rocker of nation    June 22, 2013
Last updated: June 22, 2013
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Well try but not up to the mark of these super her

Good comics but you have to try again to make it a comics but still a nice effort

Santan Series 2010-05-21 07:23:07 Ivanpreet
Overall rating 
 
1.3
Plot 
 
1.0
Characterization 
 
2.0
Exposition 
 
1.0
snakemaster Reviewed by snakemaster    May 21, 2010
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Try Again!

Jayesh Bhai, main maanta hun ki writing har kisi ke bas ki baat nahi hoti par aap agar aisa idea de sakte hain toh yakeenan usse badhiya treatment bhi de sakte hain. Halanki, aisa pehle bahut baar dekha jaa chuka hai, phir bhi isse aap ek fresh start ki tarah dekhein. Aur, inn Reviews ko apne liye ek nayi start banayein.

Santan Series 2009-10-20 19:02:53 Saurabh Agrawal
Overall rating 
 
0.5
Plot 
 
0.5
Characterization 
 
0.5
Exposition 
 
0.5
skagrawal4k Reviewed by skagrawal4k    October 21, 2009
Last updated: November 27, 2010
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...

basically this is a very bad plot line...ye kya tha??
ye kaisi kahani hai jahan aap characters ka naam bhi nahi rakh sakte...Nagraj k bachchon ka naam aap humse suggestion maang rahe ho...

Sare heroes k bachche villian ban gaye without any justification...kyu bhai...Pagal kutte ne kaata tha heroes ki biwiyon ko jab wo pregnant thi??

Parmanu k beta sare heroes including apne baap ko maarne chala...nagraj k bachche bhi bure...doga ka beta bad temper...Dhruv k bachche ofcource good kyun?? kyunki aap dhruv k fan ho??

Santan Series 2008-10-27 07:10:41 arun Gupta
Overall rating 
 
4.0
Plot 
 
4.0
Characterization 
 
4.0
Exposition 
 
4.0
Arun Reviewed by Arun    October 27, 2008
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dear

bhai bahut hi chhota lekin bahut hi naya aur achha plot he...keep it up...thanks.

Santan Series 2008-10-17 07:49:50 Mohit Sharma
Overall rating 
 
1.7
Plot 
 
1.0
Characterization 
 
3.0
Exposition 
 
1.0
TRENDSTER Reviewed by TRENDSTER    October 17, 2008
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Work hard

Hello, Jayesh.
Its really nice that in thousands of members registered here, there are few very creative writers. Keep it up.

But your story plot is too short, obvious and earlier used in foreign entertainment medias. So, dont drop urself and try again.




 
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