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Genre
Fiction
Characters
Super Commando Dhruva
Other Characters
Richa
Status
Complete

You dont need to lose your parents to be a super hero ; your girlfriend would do.

Dhruva a simple 21 year old with a special interest in gymnastics loves his sister's(shweta's) best friend Richa. Richa's murder and a broken glass vial near her body raise many questions. To find an answer to these Dhruva must lock horns with the local mafia lord "bhai ji" with the help of an escaped convict as well as travel to Lakshdweep to uncover the mystry of King Narsimha.


(a part of plot has been directly taken from the comic Aadamkhoron ka swarg but of course dont expect SP Sherkhan this time).

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Overall rating 
 
2.5
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2.6  (5)
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Dhruva... a different start 2013-06-22 09:38:59 Arun Kumar
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2.3
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2.5
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2.0
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2.5
Rocker of nation Reviewed by Rocker of nation    June 22, 2013
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Small and simple

Idea ko Thora aur explore kijiye kyonki itne se concept pe Kisi cheez ko rate karna mushkil hota hai

Dhruva... a different start 2010-05-21 06:23:34 Ivanpreet
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2.3
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3.0
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2.0
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2.0
snakemaster Reviewed by snakemaster    May 21, 2010
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....

Baba, aapke Liberal hone par aarop lag gaya. Thode, se Democratic ban jaayo! He he...Haan, toh Harry Potter ke Snape Bhai sabse pehle toh mujhe toh yeh Ad numa Plot apni purani Hindi picturon ki yaad dilata laga..Ek, baar padhna tumhe bhi aisa hi lagega. Par, jab ek baar kisi Hero ke upar 'different start' likho toh agar story kisi Comic/Film se inspired bhi ho toh usse apni creativity zone mein le aayo. Halanki, iss story mein scope hai. Par sirf Ads dene se story nahi banti. Toh koshish karo ki jab bhi likho bas phatte chadde do!

Dhruva... a different start 2009-09-25 20:08:18 Saurabh Agrawal
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0.7
Plot 
 
0.5
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1.0
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0.5
skagrawal4k Reviewed by skagrawal4k    September 26, 2009
Last updated: October 29, 2010
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what is this????????

mujhe to is story me rate karne layak kuch nahi laga...simple sa plot hai aur bahut predictable hai...bas itna change kar diya ki maa-baap k jagah gf mar gayi...nothing is their in this plot...haan agar kuch lambi story likhte to shayad main story author ki bhawnaon ko samajh pata...but I m really surprised with such gud ratings that trendy and pari hav given...i was such a fan of trendy's reviews...i m shocked hw liberally he has rated this one...

snape bro...sirf ek sugesstion...dont be so lazy...story ka title to aisa diya tha ki muh me pani aa raha tha par jab story pada to a big disaapointment...i wud suggest u to extend this story a bit...and i'll certainly edit my review...but for nw this is what i've got for this plot...

Dhruva... a different start 2009-06-21 17:29:31 parijat
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3.7
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3.0
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4.0
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4.0
parijat Reviewed by parijat    June 21, 2009
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Really nice

I have read few parts of this plot on forum also...

Inspired by Stan lee...hmm...but u know...u are not stan lee...yet u have come up with an amazing idea...

Nice plotting...

Dhruva... a different start 2009-06-09 08:50:13 Mohit Sharma
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3.7
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4.0
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5.0
Exposition 
 
2.0
TRENDSTER Reviewed by TRENDSTER    June 09, 2009
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Wow!!

Again bahut kum likha...par fir bhi itna padh kar interest jag gaya hai story kay liye. Aapne story mey mystery, action kay saath-saath Lakshdweep ko backdrop mey jod kar isme adventure bhi bhar diya hai. Yaani story mey bahut se features honge...upar se ek hero ka bilkul naye tareeke se janm hoga.

 
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